I Need An Angel

• Artist: xsilverfirex
• Description: This is my first poem I'm posting here. Tell me if you want more. And please, no stealing. I'm not sure if this is finished, but it's about being tired and hurting and having a hard time.
• Date: 08/10/2009
• Tags: need angel pain suffering tired

"I Need An Angel" 11-7-08 9:12pm

I need an angel, because
I don't think I can go on
Baby, I'm so tired
Just wanna lay my head down
Close my eyes to an eternal slumber

I really need an angel
To hold me, to strengthen me
Because... I really don't think I can go on
So tired and it hurts so much
Just wanna stop suffering

Comments

[xXxShinSeishinxXx]

Take this poem and add probably two or three more stanzas and you'll be good. all-in-all decent and very nice poem 5/5

[-Souls Of The Forgotten-]

I like the theme and the way it sounds, and everything, but it could be longer. ><
4/5