Do I Love You? Do I Not?

• Artist: bassmaster_awesome
• Description: I used to like a girl, but i didn't even know her, and when i did it turns out she was mean and a few other words i won't spoil my grammar with. >_< Also the meaning while writting this poem gradually changed but i feel confident in the way i have expressed it. Thank you for reading
• Date: 09/04/2009
• Tags: love maybe missleadingbeauty

Do I Love You? Do I Not?


Love me, Don't. I do not care! But, really i do... Save me from my heart or let me be the dart, not the board, i wish not, to be strukken by the sword. If eternal regret is what i have set, then let it be what the god called destiny has disappointingly set for me. Shall I cloke my eternal wander with a veil of mortifying discourage. Or should I stand up! Seperate from the crowd, even if it leave me death bound. I thaught, decision or idea, all of witch if chosen wrong could leave me trapped in the forbidding veil, yet the right one could set me of on a white haired stallion, my gold plated ship, ready for sail. Oh wo is me, your might so miss leading, your looks so intriguing.

If a word could best describe you it would be; Hot, if a phrase would best be used it would be; I Love You, Maybe Not.

Still the question in my tale of truth and lies, still reaches no conclusion, just a happy, daisy ryhme.

Do I Love You? Do I Not? By Jack-Rufus Kelly

Comments

[Thora009]

"Save me from my heart
or let me be the dart, not the board,
i wish not, to be strukken by the sword"

great language. beautifully written. it has an old english charm, very nearly shakespearian. much love from me to you.

[swimmer0416]

I love it escpecially whenever you said, "Do I love you. Maybe not."

[rana404]

wow, that was realy good! Beautiful!

[meloisasl]

i really like this phrase.. I Love You, Maybe Not.
waw..5/5