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Lines created,
Lines wasted.
Thrown into the trash
Of a thousnd self-made mistakes.
Written papers with un-needed stanzas,
Lines that dont match,
Words that dont work.
When we think its done and made,
Looking over, revising,
A dire mistake is found yet again,
Or it doesnt capture our own minds,
And it all needs to be redone.
THIS is who we are,
Fated to never have a finished piece by mind.
We never asked for this curse,
The poets curse.
- by Deadlylight6 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/12/2009 |
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- Title: The Poets Curse
- Artist: Deadlylight6
- Description: not my best but i would very much like some comments on wat u think and or some improving critism
- Date: 09/12/2009
- Tags: poets curse
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- paper vanhite - 09/16/2009
- i like your free versed poem. this just proves you don't always need to rhyme in every line
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