River

• Artist: luumieres
• Description: Tears.
• Date: 10/10/2009
• Tags: rivertearscry

Trail down,
Stain the path,
Of what could've,
Been,
Sickening sour,
Dropped from sweet,
Dead dreams,
Lost heart,
Forever.

Comments

[luumieres]

Thanks for the comment!
I'm glad you like it (:

[Parsleys Thyme]

This is really cool! I actualy like the shortness of it. It gives it a really "lost dreams" kinda feeling. I hope that's what you were going for. XD Great job anyways!
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