i loved you

• Artist: luv4eva189
• Description: a broken heart story in poem form
• Date: 11/23/2009
• Tags: loved

i loved you
and would give up anything for you
but you broke it all apart
told me your sorry
and it's not my fault
and then i see you with her
and i pretend i don't
i pretend i don't see the things
you do with her but wouldn't with me
i pretend it doesn't hurt me
and i don't love you
but honesty of all honest
i do love you
call it jealously
but i wonder
what did she do to make you love he what did she did to get you to do everything
i loved you but u didn't want to treat me right like that
so i wish i could say hell with ya
but i cant
i cant pull myself away from you
i want to be the one next to you
but knowing i cant
hurts the most
being right there and knowing
i cant have you
how could it be
the curtain is closing
my life just flashes
the plane that I'm suppose to be on
just crashes
just like that
cus baby i love you

Comments

[gt5q34hg]

Very emotional; the only thing I don't like about it is the lack of grammatical awareness. Other than that, I really like it smile

[jhonwyzard]

we are alike...in that way..^_^...but dont push ur self ...but let them choose the want...and w8 for them if they will come back as they fall....and have open heart still...

[Skull-Sk8r0]

very emotional on how u feel, very nice.