Countdown

• Artist: Bubbles to death
• Description:
• Date: 11/25/2009
• Tags: countdown

1,2 I love you,
that's just what you dont say.
I run, and run, and not for fun.
You wonder why I ran away.

3,4 I'm out the door,
Why was I ever here?
You're crazy, lazy, and a little hazy.
And you wonder why I'm not here.

5,6 you're a d***,
wait that doesn't rhyme,
But it's true, I hate you
and you can't change my mind.

7,8 You were late,
Hell you were never there
You were with her, and not with me
And yet you say you care.

9,10 can I come in?
That's what you say to me.
But you were wrong, for way too long
And now you'll finally see.

Comments

[alexlesage123]

Your maybe become a famous Peot or song writer

[The Dashing Gentleman]

Get your rhythm.
You need it if your ever going to be a successful lyrical writer or poet.

[Mara_Rawrr]

i thnk its good too and true lol

[Bubbles to death]

Its pretty good, but I wanna know what others have to say