Sacrificial KO

• Artist: Gazma
• Description: I have what my mother calls 'physical compassion for others'. What this means is that I can literally feel another's pain. This poem was meant to portray this, but it turned out like most of my other poems and I end up burning in the end...*sigh*
• Date: 11/27/2009
• Tags: sacrifice burn justice rape death

Touch you
Hold you
Kiss you
Feel you
Watch as he
Violates you
He's bringing me pain
Beyond repair
Watch as his actions
Choke out my air
He strangles me
With each stroke of your hair
Wait until
He enters my lair
No more can he harm you
No more can he harm
My hands at his throat
His blood on my arm
Watch him writhe
As with all of my strength
All of his sins
I try to erase
His death will please me
But that will be all
Then it will be
My turn to fall
Each action has recoil
This is for certain
For at that moment
Justice will burst in
Then I will fall
Just like my victim
At least in fire
I will defeat him
We both can burn
For what we have done
But my score is one
And he shall have none

Comments

[Sheno_BloodRose]

well i like it :/ but it needs a lil work... 4/5

[claire_luvs_ya]

I don't think you parishing is a very good thing.......