I think it is love

• Artist: Moonlight_Strolls
• Description: This is a peom about how I fell for this guy that I know will never want me but I can still dream cant I? I wrote this is like 10 minutes and I think it sounds ok....tell me what you think.
• Date: 11/30/2009
• Tags: think love

I still feel for him,
I still want him,
but he will never want me,
and that is all I can see,

This feeling I dont know what it is,
I cant stop it from comming,
it happens around him,

when we are there,
time stops for me,
my heart fills with glee,
but they say he isn't the one for me,

He won't care for me,
but that is not what I see,
when he is looking at me,
that feeling comes back to me,

This feeling I dont know what it is,
I cant stop it from comming,
it happens around him,

I think it is love.

Comments

[VividlyVariable]

It's really good... I guess I'm sort of relating to it! Nice work!

[Moonlight_Strolls]

I was sort of going with free verse ^-^; heh but it still needs a little work to it.

[lxl_Tatsuya_lxl]

it's not bad, but i think that the rhymes are a bit too repetitive

[Moonlight_Strolls]

Please comment and I hope you liked it.