Lonely

• Artist: OokamiCasha
• Description: Im not a really hardcore poetist.
  But heres some of my good stuff.
  Hope you like.
• Date: 12/02/2009
• Tags: lonely

This is a hollow feeling
Eating your insides
Peeling the celing of your house.

The house that you built
upon your mind
To keep all the dreadful,
painful, emotions inside

To think that this might
be your last day on this green Earth
But you just want to play,
sing, and dance like you did
when you were younger
When you were shieled and
oblivious to the worlds cruelty.

But now you hunger for a warm touch,
a warm imbrace,
a warm kiss,
but its gone, it probably was never there.

Now you cant feel very much
Theres no one there to guide you
Theres no one there to find you





Where have all the laughs gone for a vacation?

Comments

[Fire Rock Angel]

i Like it

[gh3tto8uddha]

it was pretty good. Though, just for future reference, poet doesn't need an '-ist' at the end. All in all, pretty good poem.

[Lizabite]

Ah! Wonderful. ^^