Snow Flakes

• Artist: ReignOblytehria
• Description:
• Date: 12/23/2009
• Tags: snow flakes

Snow isjust snow right?
Thats what everyone thinks...
But look closer
not with your eyes
your heart and soul
Snowflakes are wishes....
wishes that everyone wants to be granted

But they wont be........
they never made it
just a sad cold day to see your hopes and dreams fall down in front of you
gracfully,majesticly
but you dont see that
all you see is snow, frozen water

Again,not looking with your heart....
Snow isnt water
Its the tears that the forgotten have cried ...
With the wishes they have wanted to be granted
But they never made it....
I've seen thousands of mine...
Fall slowly...
Rock back and forth till they hit the ground and blend in with the others
So when you see me cry in the snow
So quiet, So gentle
Please dont disturb me from my pain
Because after all it haapens every year
Something I cant help
Something no one ca help

Its heartbreaking.....
So I cry
Sending more snowflakes into the sky for other wishes to fly on.......

Comments

[mirachan3]

I think it needs a more universal touch. but poetry can be personal i have lots of it. Which can be you getting out your thoughts. However I like the concept I never thought of snow like that. rain yes, but not snow. Im assuming its a personal thing that happened since my rain thing is personal for me. All in all i give it a 4/5 great job.