A Frozen Dream

• Artist: 2_Liz_24_Heart_4
• Description: I was doodling in class, (which I do often) and i drew a girl standing in a forest mid-winter and it looked like she was sad (by accident) and most of my drawings have a poem or song that goes with it so I made this poem to go with it and my friends wouldn't quit bugging till I posted it somewhere so here it is. (By the way, the drawing sucked which is why I didn't submit it)
• Date: 02/19/2010
• Tags: frozen dream winter night forest

I was walking along a path,
On a mid-winter forest night,
The moon shinning on my face,
My hair blowing in the gentle breeze,
I thought out loud,
"Why am I always alone,
In the cold,
Why is my dream,
Always broken,
Always gone,
The one to be ignored,
Why is no one else,
Here with a shattered hope,
And a broken dream,
Why do I have to suffer,
Alone, scared, cold,
When it was MY dream,
The one no one listened to,
Or cared about,
That was lost,
When I was the one,
Here alone,
I'M the one,
With a frozen dream..."

Comments

[Beats Audio]

You should make it flow together it's choppy and for some people it would be difficult to read. You can get credit from 10 people or 1000 people depending on how you approach the audience.

[2_Liz_24_Heart_4]

thnx thats so nice!! and i didnt submit the drawing cuz im not a very good doodler

[gossiper101xoxo]

its like a story !!!

[Dazed Poppet]

aww, i like this! its awesome :3
id like to see the picture that goes with it! ^^