LOVE's A MESS

• Artist: ULTIMATE Criz
• Description: A poem i felt like writing i love poetry its my first entry so enjoy my poems are usually dark and depressing so this one is about love please rate and leave and comments or criticism...
• Date: 03/17/2010
• Tags: loves mess date poem ultimate

I KNOW I AM A LOT OF STRESS
I KNOW I ALWAYS PRESS
I KNOW I MAY NOT BE EYE CANDY
BUT THAT’S JUST SOMETHING THAT’S HARD TO BE
POETRY THE ONLY WAY I CAN EXPRESS
HOW MUCH I NEED YOU I CANNOT STRESS
PLEASE REALIZE THIS
YOU ARE THE ONLY THING I EVER MISS

I LOVE YOUR SMILE
AND YOUR WONDERFUL STYLE
THE WAY YOU DRESS
THE WAY IM ADDRESSED
THE ONLY ONE I CARE FOR
WHY WOULD I WANT MORE?
THE ONLY I WISH TO DATE
THE ONE I WILL NEVER HATE

I MAY BE CRAZY
I KNOW IT MAY BE CHEESY
I MAY BE OUT IF MY MIND
IM LOOKING FOR SOMEONE I CANT FIND
AND THEN YOU WHERE THERE
I WAS HAPPY TO BE WITH YOU
IM GLAD THAT IM NOT ELSEWHERE
BUT HERE WITH YOU
I HOPE THERE WILL BE LOVE
BETWEEN ME AND YOU

Comments

[ULTIMATE Criz]

thank you ..scissors smile

[xI run with scissorsx]

i really liked it but y so uniformed? loosen up! u hav real potential

[Jashingirl18]

That was really goodl. I love how you took the time to ryme everything.

[MyScarlettDahlia]

Awww Criz that was a lovely poem, you know what that did? that moved me lol I was here now im there jk lol
You have a great mind and talent.

[CrystaI Dragon]

OOOOO I forget umm 10 stars wink great job

[CrystaI Dragon]

Wow how adoreble and very touching I liked it u have a great talent with showing how u feel with words Keep at it Hope to read about ur poems in books soon wink

[Amazon_Chik]

I like it =)