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The days go by when the weather begins to turn.
Slowly the door has close,
When one thought another could learn;
Their mistakes are easily chosen.
In the hand of the dark lord;
Blazing heat remains unbarring,
People shout, "No More!"
No one can be of hearing.
Gas piles high into the air,
The angels cry on us;
Clouds puff wildly like hair,
The light dimmed on me.
The lock has been placed upon the door,
As if caging an animal in;
Slaughtering the helpless poor,
With a laugh that never ends.
We are toys filled with no true trust;
For someone rather dark is playing with us
- by OoxBonboriChanxoO |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/31/2010 |
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- Title: Darkened Toy
- Artist: OoxBonboriChanxoO
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Description:
I dont know what possessed me to write this poem in general. If I remember straight, it was an assignment for High School when I was a freshman. But I like this poem because it is something different and it makes me feel... ok I guess.
This poem is one of the few that I actually like.
GCQ~ - Date: 03/31/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
- OoxBonboriChanxoO - 01/21/2011
- Aww...thanks...no one has ever stood up for me like that. I really appreciate that. And I wrote this poem forever ago. XD
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- Deadlylight6 - 01/21/2011
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@ daisymae12 and thomulus:
listen up douches, one spelling error, "slowly the door has close" (should be closed) but really, to judge something for one wee mistake? and no, poems do NOT have to rhyme. it can be done however one wishes to express how they are feeling or their thoughts! so you know what? nlm <-- flippin the finger! - Report As Spam
- Arvilee - 04/23/2010
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this poem makes me think of a demon lord haunting my dreams...hehe....read the demonata series....by darren shan and you will understand lord loss is the demons name...
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- OoxBonboriChanxoO - 04/06/2010
- ok, I can write a poem any way I want. and Poems dont have to rhym.
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- Haiizel Nut - 04/05/2010
- Simple but descriptive (: I like it.
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- thomulus - 04/04/2010
- I agree with daisymae12. Plus at the end it stopped rhyming? The poem didn't really make me feel anything either. Maybe you should put more work into these before putting them up. If your not going to take the time to think about the rhymes and the spelling then don't even bother!
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