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As she falls, the wind gently caresses every curve, every strand, every being of her soul,
until she is fully engulfed.
Together they dance as the spiral down. The hot breeze warming her outer core. Every
move is guided, every breathe is coated, on and on, they continue. This has no Limits.
The softness of her cheeks, as the redden from the exposure, could light up the dark.
Frail in her own way, she still falls.
One after the other, receiving their turn to be touched. They cradle the ground with beauty
so velor.
;A rose petal, she is.
- Title: A rose petal she is.
- Artist: -Exoticc
- Description: ___________________________
- Date: 04/24/2010
- Tags: rose petal
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MiseryZombie - 05/10/2010
- I absolutely adore the concept. However, the portrayal through words could be slightly tweaked. For instance "Warming her outer core..." The core of something is the center. However, -I- see the timelessness the image is supposed to be.
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- -Exoticc - 04/26/2010
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