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Those who stand have often fell,
you could see by the scars he's been through hell.
With deep red eyes that scorched and burned
You could veiw all the memories that made him turn
Black hair that never seemed to part,
can you see that equally dark heart?
He is coldness, but love all the same
he is a project in which they maimed.
that man, yes that one..
standing alone
That man had never found himself a home.
So he used everything, everything he had
it isnt fair the poor are the one who are damned.
His ripped up jeans, bare knees in the sun
sad boy, he only looked twenty-one.
but kindess flys from him either way.
More beautiful; like songbirds on display.
with torment, and sorrow..he gave all he had
it isnt fair the poor are so damned.
- by TheBlackestWidow |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/07/2010 |
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- Title: Him.
- Artist: TheBlackestWidow
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Description:
Just something for a school project, i'm trying to describe a man with poetic speech....
Okay. the guy has features that are not very normal, but i liked the vision soo... - Date: 05/07/2010
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- TheBlackestWidow - 05/13/2010
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Thanks smile
it's quick.. I admit it.. but whatev. Ill keep that in mind next time - Report As Spam
- ativat - 05/12/2010
- nice imagery, but phrasing could have been done better.
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- TheBlackestWidow - 05/12/2010
- Gasp.
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- luvdisires - 05/08/2010
- i love it its awesome
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