A Poem For School: Dreams

• Artist: Mike Likes Rakes
• Description: we had to write poems About Dreaming in school.
  This is a free verse.
  Rate it?
• Date: 05/12/2010
• Tags: dream

As your reality ends,
your fantasies start,
What you have been wishing for
has finally come
a World without war,
a place were we are all accepted,
Nothing can hurt us,
But thats not gonna happen
something we will never see,
but only imagine,
In our dreams.

Comments

[Yoshi-Youichi]

Hmm... It feels like the point of this poem is far away... like a "glittering generality". I don't really know if this is a compliment or complaint though ^_^

[Lady GagaNYC]

It remonds me of my senior year last year.
Question: This does not seem like a dream but I like it