Inspire Collection®

• Artist: Dean Reality
• Description: This is just some of my random writing bout what happen in my life while in matriculation college. I write it on Facebook and I think I would like to share it to all of you here...
  
  Each one of the 4-line content (I dunno what the literal word for it) talk bout different situation happened to me...
  
  
• Date: 05/19/2010
• Tags: inspire collection

> Saturday, March 20, 2010 at 3:36pm

We meet under the million star,
Of the night, to unleash a wish;
As we walk through this perpetual dropstar,
Never ask a cry of a fallen wish.


I dreamt of million hope seeker,
And they waiting, with full of Sorrow;
Scarred by the Hatred heartbreaker,
Sadly, nobody in this world really care to know.


Archangels spread up the wings,
Devastations unveil the rebirths,
Along the way of life with full of lyings,
Don't ever stop searching for the truths.


I drive in the middle of a battlefield,
I deprive to see sky with neverending bullet shower;
Though I strive speak out in this battlefield,
But I can't revive the situation that is over.

Comments

[Dean Reality]

Idiosyncratic Quirk : thanks for ur comment. owh, now I remember wht its it.

Actually, this not a poem for real but almost like tht. Each stanza was created in single and compile together in this collection. Sorry for not refining wht the story behind each of it... I'll edit the description.

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

The "4-line content" would be called a stanza.
I'm not saying that this sucks, but it just has no real objective to someone that doesn't have the slightest clue of what you've gone through. An opening *stanza and a concluding *stanza would make this poem make more sense, so the reader knows beforehand what to look for in the poem.