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O Gardener! My Gardener! You're my true love.
You have come and visited me from above.
Started as a seed, you planted me in the ground;
With a soft pat, you covered me with a dirt mound.
"Oh please, grow, grow, grow!"
That is what you said,
When you planted me
by the riverbed.
O Gardener! My Gardener! Thank you for all.
You took care of me, even when i did not call.
Gifting me with water as clear as crystal, too;
Tending to me until my fruit blossomed and grew.
And here I stay now;
This I do not dread,
Dying before you,
By the river bed.
- by Beautiful_Blue-Eyed_Me |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/25/2010 |
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- Title: O Gardener! My Gardener!
- Artist: Beautiful_Blue-Eyed_Me
- Description: poetry of love ♥ and care :)
- Date: 05/25/2010
- Tags: gardener
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Fille aux Cheveux de Lin - 07/11/2010
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I quite like it, but I would like to see the lines split up.
Like: O Gardener! My Gardener!
and then, on the next line: Thank you for all.
Et cetera. Quite nice, keep at it!
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- pookawho - 06/05/2010
- In a way I really like this. Good job!
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