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there is a beautiful essence in the air
it takes me away
to a beautiful place
where there is no suffering and no pain
just the beautiful blossom scent
it leads me farther away
all a round nature is beautiful
everything starts to fade
the flowers blackened
the trees covered in soot
I cry to see the beautiful world
burned to the ground
I say good-bye to the beauty
and so I say good-bye to you
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- | Submitted on 05/29/2010 |
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- Title: A Good-Bye
- Artist: the writer and the reader
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- Date: 05/29/2010
- Tags: goodbye
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- Kuragari-san - 06/02/2010
- Very well written. The only thing I'd point out is to watch the capitalization a bit, though I'm not an expert on punctuation and I haven't written much poetry...
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