Parallels

• Artist: melonite
• Description: A small poem i thought up... love it, hate it, just read it ^^
• Date: 06/09/2010
• Tags: parallels flower sadness

I saw an aging flower today
All alone and slowly dying
A single tear slid down my cheek
I felt better for the crying

There is so much deep inside
That I keep hidden out of sight
Walls of pain that I put up
Built to hide me from the light

Could you take away the hurt
If I reached blindly for your hand
Or would you simply turn away
And not want to understand

So many reasons I hold on
None of which I can explain
But my time will one day end
Like a gentle summer rain

I saw an aging flower today
All alone and slowly dying
A single tear slid down my cheek

I felt better for the crying

Comments

[melonite]

@giddyup98_ :
Thank you! I sent about 7 poems to a publisher to see if I'm good enough to make a short book. biggrin

[giddyup98]

that is such a good poem,you should be a poet

[xXx suicidal_skittles xXx]

really good!!!