The Life of Rain, Dare Say

• Artist: XI_Graceful_Assassin_IX
• Description: i dont know where it comes from but sometimes i just get this feling inside of me and i write it down best a i can and this is what comes out of the paper when i do so. I think i was feeling different surrounded by those i wasnt sure of. but i never found the purpose of rhyming in a poem that just makes the poem controled and not truly yours because you know the lines HAD to rhyme
  so in almost all of mine they dont rhyme.
• Date: 07/08/2010
• Tags: life rain dare

The Life of Rain Dare Say

To make the sky open in rage
To light the darkened world
Streaking through the sky
A lightning bolt dances
Through space and Earth
Freshening the air one needs
To breathe life into each other
Rain falls cleansing every heart and mind
Of each thing creature and life
Once the rage is gone
And the lightning subsides
The rains fall back
Into a rhymed lullaby
That puts the world to a dream
Until morning wakes
And the day starts again
To a fresh brand new
World of ours to life
And breathes until the end dares come
Until then breathe life anew
Thy rains of heaven dares to

- XI_Graceful_Assassin_IX

Comments

[XI_Graceful_Assassin_IX]

(again) thank you so much

[liljaybs96]

i agree this is a very good poem

[XI_Graceful_Assassin_IX]

thank you very much i take that to heart.

[Keiko ta]

this is so beautiful,u have true talent