Losing My Love.

• Artist: satans-plaything
• Description: First I would like to say that I only write poems when I am quite upset. I wrote this poem in maths class last year. It is total rubbish now, since he is mine and I am his. But he was with another girl and he told me he wasnt going to leave her, because they had been going out for awhile. So I was quite upset. and I wrote this. Please tell me what you think?
• Date: 07/14/2010
• Tags: love broken heart

Hiding in the shadows
Watching, waiting
I see you walk in
Silently debating

Should I approach you?
The feelings baiting
Then she walks in
The one you are dating

My eyes never leave her
Burning, hating
Your eyes fill with love
Your lover, placating

This doesn’t change things
The pain is still grating
I need to get stronger
Emotional armour plating

How can I begrudge you
The life you’re creating
I smile sadly
My rage not deflating

You smile at her
Practically salivating
You dance close to her
Hips gyrating

I feel my heart breaking
Its excrutiating
Its not your fault
I wish i was hallucinating

I hide in the shadows
My hatred culminating
I have to end the temptation
For vociferating

I sit in my corner
Hyperventilating
I close my eyes
Im through investigating

I up and leave
Quietly vacating
You will never be mine
This I’m silently stating

Comments

[Becky6626]

I know just how you feel. I'm the same way with my poems, and if one starts coming to me, I HAVE to write it even in class. I love it! I even find ryhming helps me.

[GopherNugget]

its very good lol i cld nvr rhyme like that