Fear

• Artist: cuts-and-scars
• Description: Well... It's about being hit by someone I love. Sad, I know, but most of my poems are. Please leave a comment, sharing your thoughts or giving me constructive critism.. If you don't have anything nice to say though, I would prefer not to hear anything mean. Thank you.(:
• Date: 07/30/2010
• Tags: fear

My heart is beating fast
Not from love, but from fear
I flinch at the slightest noise
Although I'm the only one here

My nerves are shot
And my head aches
I shake all over
These are high stakes

I lay down
Staring blankly ahead
And as I hear your footsteps
My body fills with dread

The door slams open
And light poors through
I shut my eyes tight
Wishing I didn't know you.

Comments

[Breaking Contrast]

I agree, amazing rhyming.

[I screwed Princess Peach]

idk if it's bad,but i love it. the way you rhymed effortlessly is amazing. altho it is sad, i thought it was awesome. good job