The First Poet

• Artist: Rainbow Bunny of Doom
• Description: The first poem in a series of poetry I was considering writing exploring the nature and position of the poet...I know that my poetry is extremely lacking in comparison to my prose (which, for the sake of modesty, could always stand to be better) ^^;; But I liked this poem, so I thought I might put it up. I need to overcome my fear of being terrible if I'm ever going to submit anything to anyplace at all O_O
• Date: 12/05/2010
• Tags: poet poetry water musings meditation

I pitter
And patter
I drip down like water
To the bottom of the world
To the source of it all
Under rock
Over tree
Between thoughts of you
And words of me
I am rain
I am wind
I am where it all begins
I come now to separate
And forever to join
The ending
The beginning
The standing
And the sitting
The truth
And the lies
Are all the same in my eyes
They are yin
They are yang
They are one within one
And both within none
Forever within never
And sang within sung.

Comments

[Imogene Grrrl]

I...honestly have no critisism of this. Nice rhyme and rhythym!