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Have you ever looked in
the gray spots of your vision
seeing deep inside to the uncertain
facing all your fears and
jumping off the edge to insanity?
Taken aback by all the
beauty you see in the darkness
the stars that shine to only those who
don't live in light.
That's where she lives, somewhere
off in the fringe, not really
feeling or seeing what everyone else does.
She has her own beat
carries herself differently than
others when she walks, sings, draws
pictures on paper and skin.
She wants to live here
She tells herself day by day;
Stay out of their view so they don't
see the real girl, the one needing the
life that they all have.
No, I'm okay in the darkness, it's
where I know myself.
I see the stars down here, shining down and twinkling
with the light the others won't see.
But someone comes in
takes away her secrets and pain
someone she can trust
put all her hope on without having
to be scared anymore. The
darkness opens, the sun shines through;
she loves the way it feels on her back and her
heart; warmth like no other. Hope.
And then suddenly the light vanishes;
warmth all gone.
She can't breathe, she now suddenly sees
what there is to offer
outside of her darkness, the hope and warmth
that had never been there before,
now gone and has left its evidence strewn across
her face... falling,
from her eyes. Falling away from
her heart.
But she wouldn't wish that upon anybody, even
the one who showed her the light in the first place,
took it away;
A cruel trick of the heart, a magic trick
so wrong.
So stay in the light and leave her there, broken
and alone in her cracked world. The
stars don't shine anymore, because the
sun took them away. Blinded.
Gone.
- by Xxhidden_wingsxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/15/2011 |
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- Title: For Those in Darkness...
- Artist: Xxhidden_wingsxX
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Description:
One of my favorite poems I've ever written (wrote...? gah, that again.) I can directly relate to it, and I'm sorry if it doesn't make complete sense to the readers if I've left out some parts or didn't explain some parts very well. It has no real pattern or rhyme scheme, but that's the beauty of poetry right?
Constructive critique? C:
- Date: 05/15/2011
- Tags: those darkness
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Comments (1 Comments)
- huntedxangel - 05/22/2011
- well for this style of writing I'd have to give it a five i couldn't find anything to criticize about
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