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You, beautiful darling,
Missed one lately
(Now, not sooner, because before you existed
In despised glory, occupying
A vague corner of my dying intellect)
Gone from original lust
To deepest hate
To desire and wanting/needing
Your return to me.
I wish we could exist in the bright
Planes of my own device
Where liquid daylight seeps quietly
Through the broken asphalt beneath our floating feet
And all is well
(In a world created by connection
sans intimacy) –
Yes, it could be said that I desire you.
Return, amamé.
- by Emilyssa Flidais |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/06/2011 |
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- Title: Un-Necessitated Need
- Artist: Emilyssa Flidais
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Description:
I wrote this last semester for my poetry class~~it's about this guy I once knew who hurt me emotionally but who I just can't seem to tear my thoughts away from.
Hope you guys like it~~it is a little vague, so I'm sorry if you dislike poetry that doesn't rhyme and isn't necessarily completely coherent~~it's pretty train-of-thought.
Enjoy~~ - Date: 07/06/2011
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Comments (6 Comments)
- SheskaHiwatari - 01/06/2012
- For once, a poem that doesn't look like it was written by a fifth grader! This really touched me, as I'm in the same boat. It has inspired me, an aspiring writer myself. So thank you, good civilian.
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- Alurin The Forsaken One - 08/08/2011
- I don't know poetry and I suck at writing it >_< I don't understand it all or follow it but I like it ^^ It don't give me the creeps (or well not right now in reading it >< wink It gets a 5/5 from me ^__^ good luck. Could you rate back on either writing (idk if both can be voted on or just one) and maybe even my current avi if you want? Thank you! ^^
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- in a pinto forever - 08/03/2011
- Simply gorgeous. I love, love, love the imagery. Even on my best days, I could not hope to come anywhere near what you have accomplished in this piece. I hope you wouldn't mind if I gave you a 5/5; in my opinion, it is a rating often overused, but in this case, quite certainly well-earned.
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- kingchris14 - 07/24/2011
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3 words for you.
fan taz tic
lmao jk jk
Great work tho
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- Ayanagami - 07/19/2011
- I don't even think T.S. Eliot was coherent. (Well, he irritates me because of this, so...) This work, I feel, is much more coherent than most poetry.
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- Dolaeruxus - 07/19/2011
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Free verse? Wonderful.
Good poetry doesn't have to rhyme or be obviously clear. - Report As Spam