What would you see

• Artist: Star Vexile
• Description: A poem about two High school students. The girl has a crush on a guy for so long, but never had the courage to say y. After graduation, the guy goes off to the Navy leaving the girl to grow up and become a beautiful woman. Now she wonders what he would think of her now if he saw her. If he would notice her and love her, or if he would think nothing of her. The repeating lines are what she is thinking as she says the words above it.
• Date: 10/04/2011
• Tags: would

I wanted to tell ya,
I needed you to know,
To give you an idea,
Before you had to go.
What would we be?
What would we be . . .

I had no courage,
I had no faith,
No advantage,
Now I'm too late.
What will I do?
What will I do . . .

But what would you say,
If you saw me now,
On a regular day,
Love will you allow?
What would you think?
What would you think . . .

Give me a clue,
Give me a sign,
Cause my love only grew,
The more I walked that line,
What would you do?
What would you do . . .

Will you love me too?
Will you love me too . . .
Or will you walk away?
And leave me sad today . . .

Comments

[Star Vexile]

Na, they can make whatever they want out of the peom. The explanation was just a story I made up.

[sarkadark]

If you have to give an explanation for people to get what you want them to out of the poem, there's a problem.