- I see you and I smile on the spot, I run out of things to say and my stomach turns to knots, intentions of being with you, your everything that I'm not, but I live for these moments, so I've gotta take the shot..I stare into your eyes and the reflection seems sweeter, I've got high standards, but boy you've broken my meter, you can hold my hand, and we'll play follow the leader, I'll treat you like a test baby, I'm no Cheater..My eyes are always on you- I admire your features, I know you protect your heart I'm thinkin' "how can I reach you", leaving me speechless every moment, I step back-take a breather, your like a brand new book, can I be your daily reader? I follow a strict path, and it leads me to sign that says "I gotta make him mine", so I know the choice is clear, I'm focused on you and you only, So don't have any fear. I know you'll treat me right, and I would never hurt you ever, I signed this verse with love as I address it as a letter. Your like my sun times 2, my days bright by you, since my lips met yours, my life seems brand new..At times I've been so twisted, but with you I know its different, everyword you seem to listen, like to give you all attention, its like, Im addicted everytime we start the kissin and if, you want to be mine, then I'll give what your missin'.. I was searchin for a change, now I know I've found you, now Im tryna get attached like uh tattoo, hope I can impress you and really wanting to ask you...please fall for me, I promise that I will grasp you..look, I'm saying, Will you be mine, cause as time passes-your the only thing on my mind.. Old flames have been extinguished, so please don't be afraid, Id never Kobe Bryant you- I'd never wanna fade away.. Maybe your eyes deceive you, of who I really wanna be, together soon, right now I'm your destiny, once together even better I'm sure you will see, being with you means everything to me honestly.. Not tryna pull a stunt, you're everything I want, I'm not tryna be blunt...But.. will you be mine?
- by MacFreak15 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/21/2012 |
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- Title: Will You Be Mine?
- Artist: MacFreak15
- Description: I wrote this the other night and today I decided to put it up on the forums. It didn't get very many looks so I figured I'd put it up in the arena. Tell me how I did??
- Date: 05/21/2012
- Tags: will mine
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MacFreak15 - 06/02/2012
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Thank you! I thought of it as more of a song. Without the grammer issues it just doesnt soundright spoken aloud.
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- archer_gurrl - 06/02/2012
- Not bad, I liked it, a lot. Maybe put it in stanzas, unless you wanted it to be left this way. There are a couple of grammar issues, but that doesn't matter. Is it a song or just a poem?
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