~Rekindled~

• Artist: xTheDeviantx
• Description: This is an original Poem, I made a while ago when I came across some a darker time in my life. i have also posted this in my Journal, and plan to keep posting my Poems so I can share with you.
  
• Date: 06/09/2013
• Tags: rekindled

This pain is to much, you're lies
I've had enough. I am drowning can't
you see? All my life has been sucked
from me.

The poison you feed me can't kill me
so I remain high on the remedy once known
to me. These tears I cry of sorrow are no more.
I have no more reason to cry, I have
saved that for my suicide.

Gaze at my sorrow through closed
eyes, then drink deeply from my cup
of life. Breathe in the madness from
my cries, while you dream of the cures
you'll never find. Scream and I may reply, but for now
I remain deaf.

Where I am you will never find,
I paid for you're crimes so you could
continue to live a lie.

Comments

[0_DaisyDoodles_0]

4/5. It would have been 5/5, but you have two grammar mistakes. In the first line and second to last line, you put "you're," which is "you are," as opposed to "your," which shows possession and would be proper in these instances.