The Subtle Killer

• Artist: bindibabe92
• Description: this a deep poem about alcohol
• Date: 01/11/2010
• Tags: subtle killer

I am alcohol
I am one of the most abused drugs
I take control of your life
I take you out of your comfort zone
Causing you to do things you normally wouldn't
I cause you pain and suffering
I slowly lead to your self destruction
I become your nightmare, your one and only addiction
I am the mask you wear, helping you escape reality
Slowly, slowly taking over your entire body
Causing you liver damage, killing off your brain cells
I am the one who tears your family apart
From fatalities to infertility
Finally taking over your entire life
I am the one: ALCOHOL

Comments

[iDynamix]

Weak.

[Break the Darkness]

Quite frankly, I'm fond of alcohol.
It's fine if you know how to use it rather than abuse it. You seem to forget that millions of people drink each day and -do not- feel any of the things you have described.
I respect that you don't like it, but I would prefer it if you were a little more aware of the people who have the understanding to use it without harming themselves or others. I won't rate, as my rating would be biased and likely unfair.

[blair maaka]

kool i love it rocks lol >.<

[Abudasho]

huh......

[bindibabe92]

i had this as an assignment

[vandersputen]

absoloutely brilliant, what inspired you to make a poem about alcohol?

[II stripe II]

i can't say anythin'