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Mirror mirror on my wall,
Wont you tell the truth to all?
Mirror mirror reflecting light,
Wont you tell of my delight?
Mirror mirror showing me,
Wont you show for all ot see?
Mirror mirror with a mind,
You're really one of a kind.
Who else takes pleasure in blood,
Bathed in it, wherever I stood.
None saw my crimes, my evils, my sins,
When my world spirals and spins.
When I take my knife to kill all I can,
And that's where my story began.......
This mirror I'm looking at,
Which saw all that,
My mirror, my precious, my love, my jewel
And people wonder why I'm so cruel?
It's my mirror that takes me in.
When I drown in my own sin.
All the lives that I took,
And I've nowhere else to look.
I stare at my mirror hard,
And with my reflection I regard.
All that I've done and I know I've no chance,
Of ever stopping this elaborate dance.
And I know the blood of so many,
Will always stain my hands.
My mirror, my precious, my love, my jewel
I've no one else to turn to, but you.
- by La Cerise Noire |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/02/2008 |
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- Title: Mirror, mirror
- Artist: La Cerise Noire
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Description:
Something I wrote when I was depressed and being emo. :Xp:
Please comment! - Date: 08/02/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xxMetalRxQueen - 04/21/2009
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to be honest i think its a bit on the cliche side.
i am not attempting to insult you in any way, i am only trying to provide constructive criticism.
the mirror on the wall theme has been done many times, i am sure you have the capacity to go beyond that.
There is nothing wrong with what you are doing now though; my writing was a bit like this when i was younger. - Report As Spam
- tksunshine93 - 12/17/2008
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I like it....sad....
Has nice rhythm to it, very well written
I'm sorry you felt this way to inspire such a good poem - Report As Spam
- DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj - 08/02/2008
- very painful so good i am very sorry for u i will show my emo sis this cuz i am worryed tat she will do the same as u thanks u for the help??!!!lol
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