A Heavy Hearted Dream

• Artist: nss11sss
• Description: I'm a heavy hearted dreamer, this is my song
• Date: 11/03/2008
• Tags: heavy hearted dream

A Heavy Hearted Dream

Hello
Isn't anyone listening
To the desperate cries of the helpless
The broken and the damned
Getting softer every second
Tell me is this anything like you planned

Isn't anyone there
Doesn't anyone care
Or am I just dreaming
Another heavy hearted dream

Is it wrong
For me to think we could do better
Is it just in our nature
To just sit around and wait for change

Please tell me you're there
Show me you care
Does anyone else feel
Like this is a nightmare

Show me I'm not dreaming
Remind me I'm alive
If we're gonna change the world then take my hand tonight.

Comments

[U n d e r Your Eyes-]

Very good 5/5

[Pyromaniac-Rebel]

I really liked the theme of this poem and, in my opinion, it flowed rather nicely.

"Desperate" is missing its 's' though. >.<;

[Nani ni Nani]

eek!
i luv it...ur talented