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She weeps bitter tears,
As she waits,
As she waits,
For someone to come to her rescue
Blood, sweat, and tears,
Runs down her arms,
As she waits,
For the Slow Goodbye
She writes her last words,
Her last words for this earth,
But it is nothing more,
Than a Slow Goodbye
Everything is starting to fade now,
The words that are being written,
Are leaving,
With her
But she thinks,
That nobody cares,
For she thinks that soon,
She will be forgotten
She drops the shiny blade,
Down into her lap,
It has been accomplished,
Her mission is complete....
But she thinks now,
That troubles have ended,
But she knows,
That they have just begun
She wonders as she slowly dies,
She wonders if anyone,
Will wonder,
About her
She passes out,
Unable to finish,
Her unworthy,
Slow Goodbye
For she smiles,
Knowing that she is dead,
But the Slow Goodbye,
Still isn't finished....
- by TheRealClamChowder |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/21/2008 |
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- Title: Slow Goodbye
- Artist: TheRealClamChowder
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Description:
Yes, this is a suicide poem, I wrote this because my cousin slit her wrists...but this is for her. I'll miss her. She left a note before she did it, but, unfortunately, she didn't finish it....
RIP- Maria Bailey
1990-2008 - Date: 11/21/2008
- Tags: slow goodbye dying
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Comments (3 Comments)
- anime-vampireknightfreak - 08/13/2012
- nice poem
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- Fox Printz - 12/20/2008
- that is the sadest thing i ever heard... read. im sorry for your loss
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- Lady Xianna - 11/24/2008
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A piece like this can't really be judged by anyone.
But i think it is good or fitting as what it is.
~Xi~ - Report As Spam