Two Brown Bears

• Artist: Sneaky_Li
• Description: Some poem I wrote without much thought. Ok, maybe some thought but just to think of rhyming words. It's about two brown bears that went to a show and are hungry. It's very amateurish.
• Date: 03/15/2009
• Tags: brown bears

When I walked along the path
To get to the bath
I said, "What are you doing here?"
To two very brown bears

Wouldn't you like know
What happened at the show
When they looked up
And saw a flying buck

What would you do
When they answered to you
We missed a good lunch
So we came to eat Lou

Comments

[Gabriel Nego]

Ohh... I like your poem!!!!... 5* for you!!!!!