Sin

• Artist: runkubb
• Description: This is a poem i wrote can you please rate it
• Date: 05/20/2009
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You can kill a deer for people to live their lives
But never beat a man to the point that he will die
For once you kill a man you have preformed a sin
For the place in heaven you will never win

Comments

[Chibi Cosmo]

thats very good!! u should enter it in a contest

[demon_in_disguise1]

Ya first to comment. So nice poem thats really cool. You should write more. Nice going keep on doing it.