you left me alone

• Artist: Gishwaisgod
• Description: i told people id keep stuff coming but due to family illness ive come to a dead stop this is just a rough version so let me know how it could be better
• Date: 06/03/2009
• Tags: unknown

You tell me that im worthless
you wish that i wernt there
i hide it all away from you
i show you that im strong
i hate the fact that you leaveing forever
but i cant wait to be alone
Alone i sit emotionless and blank
never shall i shed a tear
never will i care again
for caring leads to sadness
sadness leads to fear
fear leads to resentment
resentment leads to hatered
i dont hate you
though i should
i do not resent you
i dont know why not
i do not fear you
and i never will
over all
i do not need you

Comments

[Gishwaisgod]

um it is true and when i say family i mean i have just been diagnosed with a heart problem and my dads cancer may have come back

[Halick]

No, I don't think it could be better... x] Good job on the poem, i'm suprised that you can still write so well with that illness, isn't it really bad? Ima guessing that at least SOME of the parts are true???