The Finest of the Damned

• Artist: meet ur angel
• Description: You might need a dictionary hehe, but it comes from the heart and i hope you find it amusing and can relate to it (:
• Date: 07/19/2012
• Tags: finest damned

The love we use to share
Was mostly condescending
It made me realize
You were only pretending
Your solecism condemns you
Your deucedly good looks provoke me
Before you excogitate your next heart break victim
And vilipend their feelings; remember you’re the only target I see
For you are a pachyderm, your heartlessness becomes you
You pettifog everyday
You are iniquitous to every one of your victims
“I am adroit” is all you say
You are not benevolent
I hope you capitulate
Your victims deserve the best
What is amusing to me though, is going to hell is something you can anticipate
Good bye, prevaricator.

Comments

[Slinkenhofer]

Your voice is disjointed and hard to understand. You mix educated, high-level language with one-two syllable words, and it just sounds awkward. Some of those words you also use wit ha different connotation than the ones normally given, and I'd have to guess that wasn't intentional. All in all, it just feels like you tried to hard to use elevated language, and the end result was choppy and awkward.