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Envy is a funny little thing
It can rip you apart inside
Yet from the outside
You could appear
As calm as ever
It's almost
Like the slowest
Most deadly poison
Tearing at every little nerve
And the more
It grows
The less you can stand
Every little thing
Seems massive in size
And even the most pointless comment
Blows up your thoughts
But please
Give it no second thought
Just realize
That envy has completely
Taken over
And is here to stay
- by ILuvEmoBoyz93 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Envy
- Artist: ILuvEmoBoyz93
- Description: A poem I wrote about my favorite sin, envy.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: envy poem
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XoX_Dreamless_XoX - 11/08/2010
- Doesn't seem very interesting.The words don't rhyme much...But still it's good.Keep it up.You know what they say, Practice makes perfect! 1/5.
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- Atheshya - 07/21/2008
- Not very interesting writing, and the poem feels awkward for some reason, though I don't know why. Two stars.
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- HypolitaTheNinjaPriestess - 07/15/2008
- Great description. I enjoyed reading it!
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- Death Guardian Daichi - 07/15/2008
- I like this one. Not Just because Im emo myself and understand it as a dark description, but it clearly explains the Sin Evny. Great Job!
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- simbanewmoon - 07/15/2008
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I LIKED THIS A LOT FUN TO HEAR OTHERS THOUGHTS
RHYMED HEE - Report As Spam
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